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  1. Nihcki
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    If Rusty is supposed to be an American (like me), why is the food he associates with sweetness some never-heard-of-before, ethnic-sounding dish called “banh bo nuomg”? I’d have to Google that to even know what it is. I’m thinking that’s not the best choice for a simile; it took me out of the story because I don’t know what he’s saying there.

    I haven’t read a dual-author book yet, and can’t imagine how that even works. For me (being an Aries and an unpublished-so-far author) I couldn’t imagine sharing my story with another while putting it on paper, or trying to blend my “voice” with someone else’s. It’d take a heck of alot of patience, cooperation, and yielding. Qualities I lack, lol. Congratulations if you can successfully merge a story with another writer.

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  2. Nihcki
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    PS
    No results found on Bing search for “banh bo noumg”.

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  3. Nihcki
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    My post went up before I’d finished! Darn sensitive keyboard on my Kindle-one wrong hover and poof.. Anyway, I meant to go on to say “as as an American food”. It’s Vietnamese. So is Rusty a Vietnamese-American? Big difference, because America envelops several cultures. There are African-Americans, Mexican-Americans, etc. Plain old vanilla, white, mutt Americans would associate sweetness with donuts or cake or Apple pie. Do you get what I’m trying to say?

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    1. Lou Sylvre
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      Thanks for your reply, Nhicki! I appreciate that you found my post worthy of so much thought and effort. As you might guess, he has a Vietnamese-American mother. This is evident in the story, though not in the excerpt. Nevertheless, as the adjective “American” does indeed represent numerous ethnicities, cultures, and colors, as an American, an author, and an editor, I know the nonhyphenated adjective is inclusive and adequate. One of the reasons I chose to give him (like most of my main characters) his mixed ethnic backgound is because it so well represents the diversity embraced in the word American. It’s something I believe Americans can be proud of, and something I find rings very true to life, and anyway, I find it delightful. ? As to co-authoring, professional writers do it everyday. It’s fun and fruitful. Best wishes, by the way, on your writing career! If you love writing, I’m sure you’ll have success. ❤

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    2. Lou Sylvre
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      Oops! Sorry, Nihcki! I misspelled your name. Apologies!

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  4. jenf27
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    I have read co-authored books, the one that comes to mind is KJ Charles and Jordan L Hawk teaming up – loved that one. I know I have read others but since I did not notice any difference in writing quality, they are not popping into my head.

    Thanks for the post!

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    1. Lou Sylvre
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      Thanks Jen! That’s actually the team I’ve been trying to remember. My brain, sometimes… leaves a little to be desired. 🙂 I’m going to go get their book lickety-split. 🙂

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