7 Responses

  1. Jen CW
    Jen CW at |

    I can usually suspend disbelief for a short story and instalove. I may give this one a try.

  2. Ami
    Ami at |

    Wow, sound too much of instant love for me. Thanks for the review!

  3. H.B.
    H.B. at |

    Instalove can be a trick genre. Sorry to see it didn’t work out for you. The premise sounds interesting. I’m not too keen on rushed stories but since I’ve already bought the anthology it won’t hurt to give it a read. Thank you for the review.

  4. susana
    susana at |

    Insta love is one of the most difficult tropes to develop… It takes a lot to convince me of it, and in a short story is even more difficult. I may be passing on this one

  5. Trix
    Trix at |

    Perhaps it just needed more length? Don’t know!

  6. suze294
    suze294 at |

    I get what you are saying about the change between devoted dad to the insta-drop everything dad. Insta- attraction is fine but developing it further if you are out of your teens is tricky!!!

  7. dee
    dee at |

    Thanks for the review. I liked the way the story started out, but then it went to fast for me.


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