The Enchanter’s Flame
The Ellwood Chronicles I
Michele Notaro
Gay Fiction/Paranormal Romance
Release Date: 08.18.18
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Strange things are happening all around Brinnswick. Things that remind me of a piece of my past I’d rather forget. Girls are being killed, drained of blood, and left with strange markings on their bodies. When I finally connect the cases together, a specialist is called in—though, what he’s a specialist of is beyond me
When the chief assigns him as my new partner for the case, I can’t help but groan on the inside. Why of all people would I be assigned to Ailin Ellwood? The man is a disaster waiting to happen and a jerk to boot. A sexy jerk, but a jerk nonetheless.
What will Sebastian think when he discovers Ailin’s specialty? Will he make a run for it or will he stick around and discover a world of magic hidden beneath the city’s surface?
***The Enchanter’s Flame is the first book in the Ellwood Chronicles. It’s a paranormal romance that contains explicit material and is intended for mature adults 18 and over.***
I have written several paranormal series, as well as a science fiction series, and one thing writing all of these very different things has in common is the world building. I’ve always been a huge fan of magic and fantasy and the amazing worlds that come with them, and I’ve found that creating my own worlds is one of my favorite parts of writing.
Every writer has their own process; some like to plan out every detail, some like to dive in without any plan at all, and others do a combination of both. I used to be more of a dive in and hope for the best kind of writer, but after I started creating intricate worlds, I began planning a little more, too, so I do a little bit of both.
I like starting with a small idea and letting it grow as I begin to write and learn about my characters. For instance, with my last book, The Enchanter’s Flame, I knew I wanted to write about witches and that I thought it would be fun to write about a human finding out that magic is real. So I had a small idea when I began, and I let it grow as I began writing and learning about my characters. Once I had a better handle on the world they lived in, I planned out where I wanted them to go (although most of the time, my characters don’t listen to my plan and they do whatever they want… but I always try to follow their lead).
I’ve always kept notes—lots and lots of notes—as I write and they’ve only become more detailed over the years. I think consistency and continuity throughout a book and series is extremely important for any book. It’s possibly even more important when you’re creating a new world because you have to make sure your story is believable since you’re already writing about something that’s farfetched. That’s why notes are so important, and why it’s nice to have them on hand rather than having to go back and search through your 90K-word book for a small detail. If you have your vampires allergic to sunlight in chapter one, then have one walking around outside in the daytime in chapter five, you better have a good reason for it (like a magical ring that he wears) and you better explain it (before the end of the book, at least) or your story will lose its plausibility. Small details like that will make or break your story, so you have to make sure you keep track of your beings’ abilities and how the world around them reacts to them or how they react to the world.
When I wrote my science fiction story, it took place in the United States during the apocalypse, so I was able to use real maps and track walking times from one state to another (then add in time for sleeping and fighting). It helped me come up with a time frame for my characters to travel from one place to another. For both of my paranormal series, I’ve created whole new worlds, so once I started naming cities or important areas, I started drawing out maps for myself. It takes a lot of time, but it’s another small detail that helps with keeping your story believable.
So basically, there’s a lot of organizing that goes into creating your own world. But if you take the extra time to organize things as you go, you’ll be grateful later on when you’re able to look at one of your many docs or notebooks quickly to find information easily to keep your story consistent throughout your book or books.
I needed to pee, so I set the cat on the floor and went to take care of business. The thought of jumping in the shower while Ailin was out crossed my mind, so I pulled the shower curtain back, but yelled out in surprise. Holy shit! There was a fucking snake in the tub! “What the fuck?” I ran out of the bathroom and scooped up Seraphina so she wouldn’t go investigate the bathroom and wind up hurt, then I ran straight for the phone to call the front desk to take care of it. I had no idea what kind of snake it was or how it’d gotten in there or whether or not it was venomous or whatever. But I didn’t want to take the chance of trying to grab it myself. If it was venomous, I could end up in the hospital.
I picked up the phone and dialed the front desk, but just as the girl picked up on the other line, Ailin slammed the door open and boomed, “What’s wrong?”
I blinked at him as a huge rush of wind came in through the door, blowing the loose side of his hair. I lowered the phone a little and answered, “There’s a snake in the tub.”
He narrowed his eyes at me. “Who are you calling?”
He looked… terrifying. It was like the wind coming through the door was playing off his emotions. I knew that wasn’t really happening, but he looked as stormy as the weather behind him. “I-I was calling the front desk to come get it.”
“Hang up the phone, Seb.”
“Wh-what? Why?”
“I’ll take care of the snake. They’ll probably just kill it. I can grab him and release him outside.”
I stared at him for several seconds before hanging up the phone. I could see how serious he was, and I knew he was right, that the front desk girl would likely just kill the animal. It seemed like Ailin’s love for animals knew no bounds.
He glanced at me, then noticed the cat in my arms, and his gaze softened a little. “You saved Sera.”
“Of-of course I did. I didn’t want her to get hurt.”
Some of the wind died down. “Thank you.”
He headed straight into the bathroom, so I got up and followed him, holding the kitten tight to my chest. I stood in the doorway to watch him. He made a few sounds, like hissing, and I swear the snake hissed back, then Ailin spoke under his breath, but I couldn’t understand what he was saying.
“How are you going to get—”
I cut myself off when Ailin reached a hand into the tub, and a second later, the snake was slithering up his arm. I took a step backward and stared in disgust. What the fuck is he doing? That thing is going to bite him! Ailin stood and the snake wrapped around his arm, then around the back of his neck.
“Ailin, it’s going to bite you,” I whisper-yelled.
Ailin shot me a cocky smirk. “It’s nice to see that you care, Sebastian, but I guarantee he won’t hurt me.”
“How can you possibly say that?”
He shrugged and I frowned as the movement caused the snake to shift so its head was near Ailin’s throat. “He’s just lost.”
I blinked at him. “Okay, well, go… throw him in the parking lot or something.”
Ailin frowned at me. “I’m going to help him find his home. I think he comes from the same woods we’re heading to, anyway.”
“That thing is not coming in my car!”
Ailin huffed. “You and the car rules again! How can I possibly keep up when you keep adding more and more rules?”
I closed my eyes and my nostrils flared in irritation. “I’m not changing the rules. I told you before I didn’t want a cat in my car, so it’s the same rule… it applies to all animals.” Sera hissed a little at me, and I mumbled down to her, “You don’t count. I like you.” Okay, so I guess Ailin isn’t the only one that talks to her.
“But you changed your mind and let her in. Why would it be any different with George?”
“Did you seriously just name that snake ‘George’?”
“No, that was his name already.”
I had no words for that. “You… you’re not bringing George into my car!”
“Then I guess I’m walking to the crime scene.” He clenched his jaw, then shouldered past me out of the bathroom as I tried to scramble away from the snake. “And you think I’m the mean one.”
Michele is married to an awesome husband that puts up with her and all the characters in her head–and there are many. They live together in Baltimore, Maryland with their two young boys and two crazy dogs. She grew up dancing and swimming and taught dance–ballet, tap, jazz, hip hop, & modern–for ten years before her kids came along. Now she stays home to write about the sexy men in her head and does PTA everything–as long as coffee is involved. Two other tattooed moms run the PTA with her, and though she wants to rip her hair out from it, she still loves it.