Reviewed by Jess
TITLE: Double Play
AUTHOR: Adriana Kraft
PUBLISHER: eXtasy Books
LENGTH: 18 pages
RELEASE DATE: June 11, 2018
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College Softball Coach Julie Rubio never thought of herself as a cougar, but when a former student makes a play for her, she just might have to change her mind.
College senior Traci Anderson has waited five long years for this moment – the moment she’s no longer Coach Rubio’s student. Will their final party fulfill her fantasies?
REVIEW:
First things first—despite the cover, this is a lesbian, F/F story. The cover is used for all of the eXtasy Books 2018 Summer Shorts. No hunky men appear in this story.
As a huge reader of lesbian fiction, I can safely say that this is lesbian erotica by and for straight people. Only straight people will think the terms “titties” and “bald pussy” would be uttered in any capacity when two women actually have sex. Erotica is allowed to bend rules of reality, of course, but I just never bought it for a second. “Adriana Kraft” is actually a married duo writing under a pen name, so I imagine their work is a hit with kinky married duos, not eager LGBT readers.
I was interested at the start—after all, the combination of a bubbly blonde softball player and her butch coach is certainly intriguing. But these two women talked like they were on a porno set the whole time. They had no chemistry, and there was nothing about their relationship that made us think they would be attracted to each other—especially the fact that Julie met Traci when Traci was in middle school.
I like when erotica is a little tongue-in-cheek sometimes (pun intended). Though I didn’t really find this writing that sexy, I smiled when the softball language slipped into Julie and Traci’s throes of passion. And though it was totally over-the-top, the softball-themed sex toy would be an admirable feat for anyone.
It’s a very quick read with some fun moments, but I would skip this one. There are a lot of short lesbian erotica stories out there that work way better and bring way more heat.
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