Reviewed by Dan
TITLE: Saving Drake McKenzie
AUTHOR: Keegan Kennedy
PUBLISHER: Kennedy-Empire Media
LENGTH: 47 Pages
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There’s a manhunt happening in Queen’s Landing. The all-star junior quarterback, Drake McKenzie, has gone missing … just two days before the Catfish Bowl—the biggest game of the year. Elijah is a kid from the wrong side of the tracks. At nineteen, he lives a bleak life with his surly uncle and his horny cousin. He discovers that his uncle, Gerard, has kidnapped the football jock in an effort to fix the game. Having long fantasized about the local celebrity, Elijah goes to great lengths to free him. But Drake McKenzie wants more from Elijah that just someone to save him.
A Queen’s Landing tale… This work contains bondage, handcuffs, sports gear and other elements of male on male bonding.
REVIEW:
What would you do if you were a nineteen year old, 5’3” kid, who got great grades in high school, but didn’t get any scholarships, so you ended up living almost as an indentured servant to your uncle and cousin? Think of Elijah as a modern day male Cinderella. But before you get to thinking there is a pumpkin coach and a bunch of other fluff, may I remind you this is a Keegan Kennedy story? This character doesn’t have evil stepsisters and an evil stepmother, instead he has a gross, obese, verbally abusive uncle, and an overly horny cousin, who forced Elijah to give him blow jobs twice a day for two years until he finally got a girlfriend. Keegan wrote those characters well…I loathed them both!
The prince in this story is the quarterback of the Queen’s Landing University football team. Drake McKenzie is Elijah’s biggest fantasy. Since he bought the charity fundraiser underwear calendar with Drake in it, he has used Drakes picture almost exclusively for his masturbatory fantasies.
When Drake goes missing right before the big bowl game, and Elijah finds out that he is locked in the storeroom in the garage, Elijah knows he has to do something to help. But what happens when he can’t get the cuffs off, and has to pull out and hold Drake’s dick while he is peeing? Or should I say what happens when Drake pops a full on boner with Elijah holding it?
An entertaining story. There were a few minor editing issues, but overall the story was well written. It was shorter than I normally prefer, but a good early morning read! I really, really would have liked another hundred pages and more detail, particularly with the abrupt tie up of loose ends in the last few pages. This would be a good short story for anyone looking for a story with a kidnapped quarterback tied to a bed!
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