Review by Lily Lamb
TITLE: The Camping Trip
SERIES: The Camping Trip #1
AUTHOR: D.D. Watson
PUBLISHER: 4Fun Publishing
LENGTH: 83 pages
BLURB:
“Yes,Master.”
Gabriel has no idea what is in store for him until a man enters the adult shop where he works. Soon he finds out that the things he has been selling in the past six years are going to be used against him by a man named Jin Bliss.
Jin knows what he wants and it is not the whip he buys in the adult shop but the man who sold it to him…the kind of guy who is ready to do his bidding.
Agreeing to be trained as Jin’s pet, Gabriel eyes is opened to a world of Dom and Sub he could only dream about and craved for more…losing his virginity and discovering a whole new world are worth it when he is beside his Master.
Three months into their relationship of Master and pet, Gabriel shows his forgetfulness and Jin punishes him severely for it but it doesn’t seem to sink in Gabriel’s mind. Jin decides to take Gabriel on a camping trip but his lack of following rules starts to take its toll. So Jin calls in a favor to a friend who happens to be his ex-lover.
When talk of Gabriel being sent away to be trained by someone else starts, he finds his relationship with Jin on shaky ground. Will Gabriel be able to become a proper pet for his Master or will he lose Jin forever?
REVIEW:
Gabriel is a young virgin male who has been working in an adult shop for years and dreamt of giving himself to the right person and that person was Jin. One day Jin pops into the shop to buy a whip and they quickly click together. Jin starts training Gabriel as his pet/ slave but Gabriel is a forgetful pet and he might need to go through a special training to be perfect for Jin…and the story continues.
I must say for an 83 page story, it is full of explicit actions, humiliation and punishment so I struggled with it. It seemed the characters were lacking in substance and the plot was not clear. The dialogue between the characters was also not very interesting or engaging. There were moments I felt confused about Jin when he scheduled a meeting with his ex and his sub. Jin suddenly did not sound very Dominant but somehow confused and emotional for reasons I did not understand.
I also struggled with Jin’s ex partner and his submissive male partner. One minute one was a sub and then next minute he sounded dominant. The way they spoke with each other was confusing me a lot. At the beginning I thought they were buddies but later realized they were a couple. One minute the sub was acting dominant and the next moment was on his knees serving his dominant partner. I must say I feel hesitant to pick “The Camping Trip #2”.
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