REVIEWED by Cinnamon
TITLE: Forbidden Lust
SERIES: Novocain Book 1
AUTHOR: Grayson Knight
PUBLISHER: self published
LENGTH: 33 pages
RELEASE DATE: August 3,2017
Jackson has never felt anything from his mother. All his life she treated him badly and he thought he would never have anything good in his life. That is until Cole came on the scene. Cole was in his early forties, and he was kind, handsome and built from pure muscle. The only problem was he was about to marry Jackson’s mum, but he was all that Jackson could think about. It was on the night of his eighteenth birthday when the only gift Jackson got was a pendant from Cole that he knew meant that there was something between them. Jackson’s innocence was something that he wanted to offer Cole, but he never knew if that chance would ever appear. For now, he would have to watch from afar and hope that his fantasies would be enough. Maybe one day he would get a chance at a night with Cole, but a sexual relationship with his step father was surely off limits and taboo. Or was it?
Forbidden Lust was just so not for me. Normally I enjoy stories with some kind of incest, but I always need good writing and real feelings for that. Honestly, neither of those was present in this story. I literally felt sick and not because the step dad kissed his 18 yo stepson. NO. What pissed me off was that he did it after he married his *ohmygodtheworstmotheronearth* mother. Right after the wedding during the reception!!! Why??? The whole scenario is a bit farfetched and forced to me. Why did Cole marry such a b*tch?
Everything seemed exaggerated from the size of their c*cks to their overblown lust, the evilness of the mother to the kid’s deepthroating skills being just brilliant for the first time on a giant like that. Yeah… Right…
The story had no depth whatsoever and their emotions were just that. Lust on extasy. We didn’t get any kind of hint who they were or what they meant for each other beside a desirable body.
The bedroom talk was real porn-like as the whole plot could have been a fun porn fantasy if we ignore the marriage part.
The ending was a real WTF moment and left more questions than answers.
Though the writing has potential with a solid style and a few good lines, the book could have used one more round of editing or at least another set of proofreader eyes. Some of the typos were really distracting and I was pulled out of the story many times because of that.
I’m not sure who I can recommend this story, but if you enjoy cheesy pseudo-incest porn, this might be one for you