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  1. Anne Marie Crookes
    Anne Marie Crookes at |

    Ouch is the only thing coming to mind right now.

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  2. Sandy
    Sandy at |

    Love that you named her Murgatroid:)

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  3. Debra Guyette
    Debra Guyette at |

    Poor thing. Being kneed I imagine is not at all peasant.

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  4. Didi
    Didi at |

    (Still don’t want to peek at the excerpt) One more day until release day; can’t wait!

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    1. Rhys Ford
      Rhys Ford at |

      It’s not an excerpt 😀 Heh. The short is a prequel to the book. You’re safe ;D

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  5. James Escol
    James Escol at |

    Oh, my! My man parts! *groans* Sh*t hit the fan, huh. 😐

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  6. Kendra
    Kendra at |

    Damn! Two shots to the groin. That definitely hurts (according to my ex). I hope he takes her down in grand and painful fashion. 😃

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  7. Shirley Ann Speakman
    Shirley Ann Speakman at |

    Loving the story and poor Roku kneed twice! double ouch! I hope he catches her and takes her out. Looking forward to the next part.

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  8. James Robert
    James Robert at |

    Thank you for the opportunity to win

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  9. Judy Stone
    Judy Stone at |

    Murgatroid is either guilty as hell or batshit crazy. Flatten her Roku! And where is his partner? Market security? Friendlies with magic ability? The sooner you deal with the nutcase, the sooner you can apply ice.

    This is getting so good! Can’t wait for tomorrow.

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  10. Josie
    Josie at |

    Good grief this woman is a menace. Loving your grandchild is one thing, but knowing she’s this reckless and not trying to teach her better, shame on the judge, man.

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  11. kp59
    kp59 at |

    loving this story!

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  12. Eric Alan Westfall
    Eric Alan Westfall at |

    If y’all could just imagine the Les Miz folks singin’ One Day More in honor of Rhys????

    *s*

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  13. andyslayde
    andyslayde at |

    Poor Roku! I can’t wait to see how this turns out. 🙂

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  14. heath0043
    heath0043 at |

    Ouch, ouch and more ouch. the book sounds great, good luck. And I hope the man parts heal quickly.

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  15. Trix
    Trix at |

    Yikes! Gives a whole new meaning to “heavens to Murgatroid”…

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  16. zunnix
    zunnix at |

    Ouch! Poor Roku!

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  17. Alyssa U
    Alyssa U at |

    Love this short! Cannot wait for tomorrow!

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  18. Brenda
    Brenda at |

    I’m with everyone else, all I can say is ouch!!

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  19. jenf27
    jenf27 at |

    I hope Roku gets that hedge witch good! What happens to his sight reminds me of what happens to my vision when I get a migraine – not fun.

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  20. Tanja
    Tanja at |

    Ouch, poor Roku.

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  21. elenilote
    elenilote at |

    Ahhh that must have hurt! Poor Roku :/

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  22. Stanley Errington
    Stanley Errington at |

    Loving the blog tour. Eagerly rubbing my hands in anticipation for the book

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  23. Kimberly Curington
    Kimberly Curington at |

    Ow! Can’t wait to see how this ends…

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  24. Ami
    Ami at |

    Thanks for the serialized. Will return here after I read the novel 🙂

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  25. Lisa
    Lisa at |

    OMG, Murgatroid is a menace! Poor Roku!
    legacylandlisa(at)gmail(dot)com

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  26. Kat
    Kat at |

    I’m picturing tea leaves stuck in frizzy hair like a kewpie doll or one of those fuzzy trolls. 😂

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  27. salann31
    salann31 at |

    This makes me so happy 😊

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  28. Lee Todd
    Lee Todd at |

    that was….ouch! lol
    can’t wait to read this

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  29. Jen CW
    Jen CW at |

    Oh wow! Loving these installments.

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  30. ineztey
    ineztey at |

    Poor Roku!!

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  31. H.B.
    H.B. at |

    oh my.. well that was unexpected.

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  32. Christy Duke
    Christy Duke at |

    Seriously? Knee a man in the balls? Twice? Oh girl, you deserve what you get!! I’m having so much fun with this, Rhys!! Thank YOU!!!

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  33. Purple Reader
    Purple Reader at |

    Congrats and thanks for the post and short. Oh man, I’ve only been hurt like that by accident, but on purpose? I feel for you dude. This looks like an interesting story, what with the urban fantasy, magic, murder and suspense. Sounds like Lynn West knew what she was doing in asking you to expand on the short. –
    TheWrote [at] aol [dot] com

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  34. Toni
    Toni at |

    Looking forward to reading!

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  35. susana
    susana at |

    OOOH! You cannot stop here! Now I need to know if all that effort and chanting worked or not…

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  36. Jen C.
    Jen C. at |

    Dang!?! Not nice! Not nice at all!

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  37. younela
    younela at |

    Oooo. Ouch! So exciting.

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  38. Serena S.
    Serena S. at |

    I’m loving this short prequel, so cool!

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  39. Lena
    Lena at |

    I love books of this genre, I’m going to read this one!

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  40. allesonfaye
    allesonfaye at |

    I’m glad I already have the last blog post so I can go ahead and read the ending!

    allesonl@gmail.com

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  41. LisaS
    LisaS at |

    Oh the pain! What a cliffhanger!

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  42. Wren
    Wren at |

    Glad I wait until you are finished posting them all. I really hate waiting…so impatient. Ravensimoon (at) aol (dot) com

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  43. dejamew
    dejamew at |

    So excited to read this prequel. Can’t wait to start the book.
    dejamew@centurylink.net

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  44. Sadonna
    Sadonna at |

    Oh my! Now she’s really mad Roku mad 😉

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  45. Jillian Too
    Jillian Too at |

    I’d love to borrow those peppers. They would be fun to try.

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  46. Tracie Cooper
    Tracie Cooper at |

    I would love to read this prequel, the perfect summertime read!

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  47. Amanda Whitley
    Amanda Whitley at |

    sounds awesome, and lovin the cover guy ♥

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