Reviewed by Kat
AUTHOR: Remy St. Lawrence
PUBLISHER: NineStar Press
LENGTH: 21 pages
RELEASE DATE: February 21, 2016
Six months after the breakup of his relationship, Rex has yet to move on. New in town, he is alone at a bar, and for the first time, Rex is tempted by a heterosexual couple. As the centre of Robert and Ilham’s attention, Rex realizes he is on the verge of a new experience.
In a story that is only 21 pages long, an author has to grab hold of the reader right from the opening paragraph. For a short story to be labeled “erotica” I believe that you have to have at least a kiss before 50% into the story. Unfortunately, this story, which is very short – only 21 pages long, never grabbed hold or kept me interested in the story. If I had paid the $2.99 for an erotica story I would have been really ticked. The sex was okay, the characters were nice enough but I never connected to them at all, and, in a story that short, who cares what shoe size the one character appears to be? The story was just that, so-so. And being the fast reader that I am I should have been done with it in minutes but instead it took me a couple hours to finally “get through it” after distracting myself easily with anything other than this book! Sorry but it just fell short and lacked any kind of grip. Unfortunately, my honest recommendation would be to hold on to your money for a real book.