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  1. jenf27
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    Thanks for continuing this story. Raidean is a wonderful character and Yazmin seems like she will be great, too. I hope she turns out to be a good friend to Raidean.

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    1. Kell Ryder
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      Thanks for taking the time to read Raidean’s story.
      <3 Timmy

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  2. Aniko
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    This is such a good story, and Raidean is a wonderful character. Thank you for writing it, Timmy. I look forward to reading the next instalment!

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    1. Sara Ella
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      Raidean’s thoughts are so well written – so real. I love how excited he is to make his own decisions and had to laugh at the party after effects. This is such a great chapter! Thank you Timmy 🙂

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      1. Kell Ryder
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        Thanks Sara. I can say from experience that coming out of one’s shell is scary, but also exciting.
        <3 Timmy

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    2. Kell Ryder
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      Thank you Aniko, and thank you for reading it.
      <3 Timmy

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  3. Mel Leach
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    Another great chapter, Timmy. The story flows so well and you always leave us wondering what happens next. I’m so happy to see the inner strength developing in Raidean. How he is coming into his own and accepting himself for the thoughtful, loving, and beautiful person that he is. No longer allowing others to define him. I can’t wait to see what you have in store for us.

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    1. Kell Ryder
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      Thank you so much. This story, like the one’s before it wouldn’t be what they are without all your help. You are a great beta reader and editor. Thank you for helping me tell Raidean’s story.
      <3 Timmy

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      1. Mel Leach
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        <3 <3 <3

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  4. Anna Lund
    Anna Lund at |

    There is true growth happening in Raidean, I love how he takes his own stage. Well done, Timmy! <3

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    1. Kell Ryder
      Kell Ryder at |

      He is growing, and though there is still going to be obstacles and rough patches, I’m see him grow and enjoy life more. I can’t wait to continue writing his story and show you guys what an awesome person Raidean it.
      <3 Timmy

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