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  1. sandym0327
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    Wow. Timmy, you totally blew me away with this installment of Raidean’s story. It was so emotional and you did such a fantastic job of conveying your character’s thoughts and feelings. You know, you had me believing that Taylor might be able to redeem himself and then BAM! You pulled the rug right out from under me! I was heartsick at his thoughtlessness, and his mean words. How could he be so cruel? That you could evoke such a strong response from me is the mark of a great storyteller.
    Raidean is a wonderful character and so well rounded. What I mean by that is, you allow us to see his vulnerability and his strengths. And man, is he strong.
    On the technical side, you’ve always written very well, but as each part of the story evolves so does your writing. Keep at it, Timmy, you are really good at it.
    Thank you so much for sharing Raidean’s story with us, Timmy.

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    1. Kell Ryder
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      Well, I think Taylor is like so many guys. They think if they are with someone “different” they are doing that person a favor. I hate that thought, but it happens.

      I’m so glad you see my writing improve. When I was rereading this, I thought my writing was lacking something.

      Thanks for reading!
      <3 Timmy

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      1. sandym0327
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        Timmy, your writing is lacking nothing. Maybe that’s just author jitters? I know we can be our hardest critics, but no need to worry here. This is very well written and the story intriguing and interesting.

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        1. Kell Ryder
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          Thanks Sandy!

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  2. Sara S
    Sara S at |

    Another wonderful installment from Timmy. Ray’s thoughts are so real. His fears, his conflicting emotions and indecision is written so well. I am looking forward to the next chapter! 🙂

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    1. Kell Ryder
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      The conflicting emotions and being indecisive is the easiest part about writing Raidean’s stories, because it’s how I feel all day every day!

      Thanks for reading!
      <3 Timmy

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  3. Anna Lund
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    I am ever more impressed with your writing, Timmy. This installment shows off your skills as a storyteller—but it also shows how in touch you are with feelings. It is very emotional, and completely engaging.
    Taylor needs to back off, he really makes me so angry. And just when the anger rises, you introduce a new, intriguing character. Yazmin. Well, then. A Goth. Excellent.
    Can’t wait to read more! Well done, Timmy!!

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    1. Kell Ryder
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      I’m so excited about Yazmin. I hope she becomes the friend he so desperately needs. Only time will tell.

      Thanks for the read!
      <3 Timmy

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  4. deeze65
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    You totally nailed the feelings with this one. I was as conflicted as Raidean about Taylor. Well done <3

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    1. Kell Ryder
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      Thanks Deezey!
      <3 Timmy

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  5. Danielle
    Danielle at |

    incredable post Timmy thanks for sharing your brilliance <3

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    1. Kell Ryder
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      Thanks Danielle!
      <3 Timmy

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