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  1. Kyle Adams
    Kyle Adams at |

    Thank you for the wonderful review Elizabeth. i do appreciate you taking the time to read and review all three stories.

    This is not to be defensive or an excuse, just an explanation. I want to point out that, yeah editing errors really do suck, and now I’m wondering what all I missed. But I do take my time and read through them 7 + times and unfortunately, my brain compensates for my errors and I just don’t see them.

    I do have great beta readers, but none of them are professional editors either. I guess a side effect of having stories be free is not having them be professional quality. Sorry it ruined some of your reading enjoyment.

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    1. Kyle Adams
      Kyle Adams at |

      Elizabetta, I just realized I typed your name wrong and don’t know how to edit my comment. Sorry.

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  2. Dani
    Dani at |

    Thanks Elizabella also for posting the links in the review 🙂

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  3. Macky
    Macky at |

    My faves! Great review Elizabetta. 🙂

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  4. Susan65
    Susan65 at |

    I loved these stories and didn’t notice any major editing issues. I am left wondering what I missed and went back to reread them specifically looking for editing issues, and afterwards I am still left wondering. I wish this review gave an example or two, otherwise I find it misleading and unfair to an unpaid author.

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  5. elizabetta
    elizabetta at |

    Hello Kyle and Susan, This is not the forum to go over specific story edits, I’m sure you’ll agree. Here’s the link to my review on GR where you’ll find a short list I just posted there. Unfortunately, I didn’t make note of them all while I was reading but hopefully this will help out: http://www.goodreads.com/review/show/620428253

    I did enjoy the stories 🙂

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